Friday, June 6, 2008

a half written post in complete sentences

There is an incomplete song playing in my head,
a half-written poem lying on my bed.

There is an incomplete argument waiting to be won.
with a half-committed boyfriend soon to be dumped.

There is an incomplete move waiting to be danced
by a half broken spine thats supporting me by chance.

There is an incomplete life to which death seems the closest.
a half decomposed skeleton is lying in my closet.

There is an incomplete present feeling totally butchered.
and a half-forgotten past thats eating up my future.

There is an incomplete drunkenness preparing to get drunk
with a half empty glass that looks half-full when hung.

There is an incomplete sin asking to be committed
my half-eaten apple just got digested.

7 comments:

Puppet said...

Okay I have the chorus, It goes in the background::

There is an incomplete song playing in my head,
a half-written poem lying on my bed.


Its just a verse away... Its just a verse away

There is an incomplete argument waiting to be won.
with a half-committed boyfriend soon to be dumped.


Its just a bitchin word away... Just a call away...

There is an incomplete move waiting to be danced
by a half broken spine thats supporting me by chance.


Its just a step away... Step and break-away...

There is an incomplete life to which death seems the closest.
a half decomposed skeleton is lying in my closet.


Its just a cut away.. Keep the closet closed... Oooooh tht smell...

There is an incomplete present feeling totally butchered.
and a half-forgotten past thats eating up my future.


Its just a fag away... Its just a joint away...

There is an incomplete drunkenness preparing to get drunk
with a half empty glass that looks half-full when hung.


Don't you drive... And hey there!!

There is an incomplete sin asking to be committed
my half-eaten apple just got digested.

Oh so thats what it was.... Hmmm
Complete it...
:-P

D said...

hilarious!!!! what are we waiting for?...lets add some bass, get someone on the percussions and start jamming right away !!!!!!

D said...

puppet..i can't stop laughing...i just love love love the chorus so much that i think this should be my final post!!!!

Puppet said...

Really??!!

**Scratches his head**

Well I will handle the leads if thats what you want.... And rythms too....

D said...

Will we win a grammy for this one?????

Puppet said...

Well to be frank I dont work for awards... But they are always welcome... They do get a new jist of life in your work...

I prefer to work hard and endlessly... My reward of course is things that are beyond this world... i.e. millions of dollars... good booze and endless unaccountable sex.... You can keep the grammy

D said...

I will take the grammy and would love to thank everyone for the same! cheers!!!