Sunday, June 1, 2008

chota

when i am drunk, she drives
what i demand, she supplies

At times
we secretly cry listening to the same song
and still pretend to not get along

i choke, when she smokes
she pays, when i am broke

Sometimes
we take each other's arse
and then casually mention that, " this too shall pass"

when i abuse, she ignores
what i ignore, she adores

There are days
when we talk only with our middle fingers
And act like we'd act with total strangers.

i pick what she drops
she runs while I hop.

Often
we become each other's blessing in disguise
she is a spoonful of truth in my bowl full of lies.

when she asks, i oblige
while i die, she survives

24 comments:

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

good one....heartfelt. Is it actually someone u are speaking about or is it your own other-self.

D said...

my younger sister.

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

hmmm, u are lucky to have someone who understands you so well.

D said...

she is a devil!

madman said...

sujoy: schizophrenic, is what she is. she does not have a younger sister, as in for real ( its her ficiton ) .

D said...

i have i have...i swear on god..i do...i am for real...ok!!!!!

D said...

and so is my sister!!!

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

@madman
Thats illuminating.....never actually had any first-hand experience with schizo...John Nash in A Beautiful Mind being the closest.
Now I do.

madman said...

sujoy: her sister is the one who is schizophrenic n not her..
she is fictional :p

D said...

lolz!

D said...

and uffffff too!!!!!

madman said...

haWWWW

Puppet said...

**Nods in understanding**

**Had guessed sister before reading the comments... So is now proud of himself...**

**He has mastered the art of typing his mind... Not mere words but thoughts actually transferred into strings of english alphabets stringed together in such a fashion for humans to understand and praise..**

**Quits writing now**

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

*throttle,throttle*

I feel like killing myself

D said...

please don't kill yourself.. lets all live, drink, eat and fly!

madman said...

lets kill each other wat say?

Anonymous said...

hello fictional pooja. i love this thread of conversation! and i love your writing! its super fresh and honest...yay!

D said...

chitra..my next post will be on fictional pooja. These people ...i tell you!!!!!


madman lets kill after the next post!

D said...

puppet..i am proud of you!loud applause!!!!

Puppet said...

HEY!! Don't drag my name into the conversation...

Nah, just kidding, I love all the attention I get and I ought to get more...

I would like to take this opportunity now to thank everybody but for them I wouldnt be mentioned here.. Me, me and me

The owner of the blog needs a special mention for she filters all comments before they get published.... Ok now you gotta publish this....

D said...

i don't really filter anything...i publish all the comments..moderation is on only because it is easier to keep track of comments and reply to my fans! ha! i am talking like a star already!!!

madman said...


madman lets kill after the next post!


I am game..



i don't really filter anything...i publish all the comments..moderation is on only because it is easier to keep track of comments and reply to my fans!

heard of email notifications..

DUH!!!



it is easier to keep track of comments and reply to my fans!
ha! i am talking like a star already!!!

U got it ryt

D said...

How do i activate email notifications??? Please enlighten me!!!

Munna on the run said...

Really really nice.
Been reading your recent posts. Always a pleasure to read.