Tuesday, January 15, 2008

today

today i want to be

a period stain
a clogged drain
indian monsoon with no rain

a plain jane
a deserted lane
an open wound with no pain


a broken chain
a passenger train
a cheap holiday bargain!

11 comments:

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

*ROTFL*
that was utter nonsense...

D said...

what is ROTFL? Isn't that utter nonsense too?

Kara Weaves said...

yay!! lovitt!

D said...

:)

madman said...

it rhymes too much

Puppet said...

Sane??

The world is an ass...
you can be the pain...

D said...

the world is a pain..i feel like an ass!!!

D said...

i love poems that rhyme!!!i feel uncomfortable when they don't...i am an asymmetrical person who like symmetry!!! :)

Puppet said...

A poem will be a poem whether it rhymes or not... A circle is a line but you may call it a dot...

madman said...

love it or hate it, it will be a poem.
!!

D said...

indeed!