today i want to be
a period stain
a clogged drain
indian monsoon with no rain
a plain jane
a deserted lane
an open wound with no pain
a broken chain
a passenger train
a cheap holiday bargain!
Tuesday, January 15, 2008
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*ROTFL*
that was utter nonsense...
what is ROTFL? Isn't that utter nonsense too?
yay!! lovitt!
:)
it rhymes too much
Sane??
The world is an ass...
you can be the pain...
the world is a pain..i feel like an ass!!!
i love poems that rhyme!!!i feel uncomfortable when they don't...i am an asymmetrical person who like symmetry!!! :)
A poem will be a poem whether it rhymes or not... A circle is a line but you may call it a dot...
love it or hate it, it will be a poem.
!!
indeed!
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